This blog was created for us Pre-Production students to engage in critique, send links, and show off our progress at times other than the three hours per week we are typically given in class! Hopefully this blog will spark some sweet critiques to help each of us make the most awesome thesises, thesi, or whatever the pural form of thesis may be...
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Haha wow you changed a lot. It makes a bit more sense to me. The second to last shot is a bit awkward and the fact that this is all just kid's play is no longer a surprise to viewers. But I think it's coo'. Wait did he climb through his own window?
Haha wow you changed a lot. It makes a bit more sense to me. The second to last shot is a bit awkward and the fact that this is all just kid's play is no longer a surprise to viewers. But I think it's coo'. Wait did he climb through his own window?
ReplyDeleteforget this version guys. My mind wanders to crazy places from time to time.
ReplyDeletegoing back to the original version.